2008년 1월 17일 목요일

The Twits


The Twits


Author: Roald Dahl


8/10


Primary Conflict: Mr and Mrs Twits are abusing the Mugglewump monkey family by making them stand on their heads 6 hours a day.


Best Part: I like the part when Mugglewump applys superglue on the ceiling of the Twits's house and sticks everything on the ceiling. the Twits think that they are standing upside-down, so they stand on their heads with superglue on it (by the Mugglewump family too).

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mhughes :

Your best part is right on, but again you must identify the main conflict of the story. You are close, but not there.

What's happened to capital letters? They still should be used in all your writing for school.