Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone
by J.K Rowling
12/10
primary conflict: Harry's mom and dad is killed, so harry lives with his mean uncle, aunt and cousin Dudley.
best part: My best part is when harry finds out that he is a wizard and has to go to Hogwarts, a magic school. He goes there and meets many friens, like Hagrid, Ron and Hermione. Also, he fights Voldemort, (protecting the philosopher's stone from him) an evil wizard who killed his parents when he was a baby.
by J.K Rowling
12/10
primary conflict: Harry's mom and dad is killed, so harry lives with his mean uncle, aunt and cousin Dudley.
best part: My best part is when harry finds out that he is a wizard and has to go to Hogwarts, a magic school. He goes there and meets many friens, like Hagrid, Ron and Hermione. Also, he fights Voldemort, (protecting the philosopher's stone from him) an evil wizard who killed his parents when he was a baby.
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What you are saying is true in the primary conflict, but it is not what is driving the story. You need to think more and differently about this. See me if you need help.
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